English Essay Practice: Banning Pokemon GO②



English Essay Practice: Banning Pokemon GO②

2016-08-04 11:00

    I started this blomaga to enhance my English writing. I'm studying for the next EIKEN Grade 1 scheduled on October 10, 2016. In every article, I set one topic debatable, and then I write both an affirmative opinion and a negative one.

    Topic: Pokemon Go should be banned from sightseeing spots.

    [Negative view]

    -Notes in brainstorming

    ・Not every Pokemon Goer is evil. The good with good manners basically have right to enjoy it.
    ・Beneficial commercial effect is huge.
    ・In the future, current state that is now excessive boom will be moderate. Now is the peak in the population of Pokemon Go users, which will gradually decline. In addition to that, the more accustomed people get to playing Pokemon Go, the better manners they will learn. Problematic situation gone.

    -Structure of essay
    1.Three reasons to disagree with the banning; right, commerce and long-term situation.
    2.About right
    3.About commerce
    4.About long-term right

    (main sentences)
     People should be allowed to play Pokemon Go in sightseeing spots. There are three reasons to support my claim.

     First, every Pokemon Goer is not evil. People with good manners basically have the right to play it. They don't position themselves where they disturb others. They don't walk, but sit on a bench calmly, which is perfectly as safe as just chatting with friends. When action is safe, do it must be allowed.

     Second, Pokemon Goers are very profitable to sightseeing districts. Once many Pokemon Go freaks visit one place, they use a lot of money because after they walk a lot they get hungry and buy food. While walking around, they find not only rare Pokemons but also something attractive of the local area. If it is a museum, they will go in. If it is a pretty souvenir shop, they will buy in it. Thus, their economical effect is huge.

     Third, although I admit that now there are some problems about Pokemon Go like collision accidents or illegal intrusion, they will be no problem in the future because the players will gradually get accustomed to Pokemon Go. Currently, it is just after when Pokemon Go was released, so people are excessively hot. But, it is natural that time calms boomed people, and also good-manners people will continue to insist playing Pokemon Go obeying rules, which will prevail in everyone's mind. Surely, the number of troubles and evil players will decline.

     I think that people against Pokemon Go become too anxious affected by the outstanding boom. When we consider the situation reasonably, we can understand soon that there are not so big problems as others are warning.
    (282 words)

    Writing with this style, meaning lying reasons one by one, is quite easy and understandable. I will put this aside as a final tactic, and will not use it overly to practice every kind of writing style.