English Essay Practice: Multinational Corporations Play a Positive Role①
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English Essay Practice: Multinational Corporations Play a Positive Role①

2016-08-13 11:00

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    I started this blomaga to enhance my English writing. I'm studying for the next EIKEN Grade 1 scheduled on October 10, 2016. In every article, I set one topic debatable, and then I write both an affirmative opinion and a negative one.

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    TOPIC Do multinational corporations play a positive role in todays world? (from EIKEN July 2013)


    [Affirmative View]


    -Notes in brainstorming


    Products

    -Not only the people where a corporation is originally located but also others are able to receive the happiness of their products.

    -You will be happy to play Pokemon Go


    employment

    -A lot of people are employed and earn living

    -Even in developing countries, the employed people are likely to be paid fairly higher than those working for local companies.

    -As a result, those companies contribute to raise the quality of life due to their high salary.


    contribution welfare

    -Investment into education, infrastructure building

    -As those companies are concerned about their what reputation they get from others because, if they fail to get it, they must withdraw from and lose a big market they put emphasis on investment into infrastructure to get good reputation.



    (Main Sentences)

     I think multinational corporations are playing a positive role in the world. I explain three reasons for it.


     First, people are benefited by the products of multinational corporations. They sell their products globally, and you become satisfied with them. That people can choose what they want from a wide selection of goods means that they can pursue their happiness. In this sense, the importance of multinational corporations should not be neglected.


     Second, multinational corporations employ local people with high salary. Those companies are enthusiastic to expand their market to the world, and they require the workers to be so. Then they pay high salary. This contribute to raise the level of income of the local people. High income leads to happiness, so global companies are worthy.


     Third, many of multinational corporations invest into welfare. For them, reputation from the local area is crucial, and they spend money in improving education system, or infrastructural buildings because if they get bad reputation, the citizens hate them, do not buy their products, and they must lose a big foreign market. Whatever their true intention is, it is a fact that their investment are beneficial.


     These days, multinational corporations enable you to realize your desires in many ways. In the next age of Internet of things, their effects will become faster and bigger, and their roles will be more and more important.

    (228 words)



    [Overview]

    This is the fastest essay that I've ever written, and at the same time the most pointless one. It is awful with too many repetition, thin analysis, and monotone structure. I need more speedy contemplation to finish in time that generates more ideas and put them in a sharper passage.


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